10th Grade Literature Students,
In order for you to share your poem and word cloud with me and the class, I want you to post a comment to this blog post. Directions: Where it asks for your NAME, please include your class period at the beginning. (EX: 1, Your Name) Where it asks for COMMENTS, copy and paste the link to your google document. CHECK that you have changed the sharing permissions to "ANYONE WITH LINK CAN VIEW." This google document should have the final draft of your poem and your completed word cloud. I look forward to seeing what you have created! Mrs. McDowell
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3, MIchelle Mexican
10/20/2016 01:31:53 pm
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1KSdu5mjpNEp7ZRGnHv1psz6JhvR-WeHDxvpyaZYyE7E/edit
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Mrs. McDowell
10/20/2016 04:17:23 pm
Right now the permissions you have set in the google document don't allow me to view your poem. Can you update this and reply with the sharable link?
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Mrs. McDowell
10/20/2016 04:22:06 pm
Right now the permissions you have set in the google document don't allow me to view your poem. Can you update this and reply with the sharable link?
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allie sepulveda
10/20/2016 01:40:03 pm
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1kgO_qvZNtfaHqliIIuclXDvD4jIHHWyPKIIxu2o6pRA/edit?usp=sharing
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Mrs. McDowell
10/20/2016 04:27:18 pm
Thank you for sharing! I like how your word cloud is a mask to represent that some parts of America are "fake," since a mask covers up reality.
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Mrs. McDowell
10/20/2016 04:23:43 pm
Right now the permissions you have set in the google document don't allow me to view your poem. Can you update this and reply with the sharable link?
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4, Makayla Tristan
10/20/2016 02:35:37 pm
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1QHrv0LByhPHy8KWng0-TA7MeGkmDl3MiIuDpBJVZL0s/edit?usp=sharing
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Mrs. McDowell
10/20/2016 04:30:19 pm
Your poem has great symbolism! I wonder why you picked the shape that you did for your word cloud?
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4 Karina Hernandez
10/20/2016 02:38:13 pm
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1brvGlB71gqQgLaQZZyLcN1S05WQsTHq3pXQ4IMfeAhg/edit?usp=sharing
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Mrs. McDowell
10/20/2016 04:34:11 pm
Thank you for sharing! I am curious why you picked an eye for your word cloud shape. What did it mean to you?
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4Samuel Dellheim
10/20/2016 02:43:57 pm
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1zfVz3r0UZC4a4UjNsBvtmYy1GgzqwifvHvAAtmUL6ZY/edit?usp=sharing
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Mrs. McDowell
10/20/2016 04:36:25 pm
Interesting use of color to convey more meaning! I am curious about the title. How did you come up with that?
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4, Alberto Sarmiento Jr
10/20/2016 02:44:40 pm
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1TaU7ZlMTk3765VAbgKuwOw3IAlDvq03YZhebc7gYhDk/edit?usp=sharing
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Mrs. McDowell
10/20/2016 04:39:03 pm
Such a great title to match the formatting on your poem! Why did you pick the Uncle Sam hat for your word cloud?
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4, Anthony Carnero
10/20/2016 02:48:43 pm
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1mKjDyB7dIypVPWXi3LIAHDqICQVolyqwGAGUMabiQwE/edit?usp=sharing
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Mrs. McDowell
10/20/2016 04:41:18 pm
I think your extended metaphor is so accurate, and the word cloud helps capture your message. Nicely done!
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4, Leilah Vasquez
10/20/2016 02:49:30 pm
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1WeDprmmAIfTJf_xt3Ea_SAuT0PM7GSWhRhsqhpsdw3A/edit?usp=sharing
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Mrs. McDowell
10/20/2016 04:43:27 pm
That first question you ask is so interesting; I would love to see it incorporated more in the poem.
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4katiameraz
10/20/2016 02:50:34 pm
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1HphOvrIIfd9Db1jAI_B6GnyPFzT3_8PpCB8dT-DNlfY/edit?usp=sharing
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Mrs. McDowell
10/20/2016 04:46:22 pm
Your poem has powerful emotions and images. I am curious about the shape you picked for the word cloud. What was your reasoning?
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Mrs. McDowell
10/20/2016 04:47:51 pm
Right now the permissions you have set in the google document don't allow me to view your poem. Can you update this and reply with the sharable link?
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4, Xavier lobatos
10/20/2016 03:00:11 pm
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1m1YvsPc8h1OJP4v9bMpoAh_SFYiAZlCBBDX1lO9FsRw/edit?usp=sharing
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Mrs. McDowell
10/20/2016 04:50:50 pm
Thank you for sharing. You had a great simile in there. I am curious about why you focused on Trump and used that image for your word cloud. What made you decide to go that direction?
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Kaleb Manymules
10/20/2016 03:03:23 pm
https://docs.google.com/document/d/17_RmdCEkul0G-dMkcjL_YxF3taMS18FgjBVWkcQWaSE/edit?usp=sharing
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Mrs. McDowell
10/20/2016 04:53:55 pm
Your word cloud looks great. I am curious why you picked the title "Horizon." What was your thinking?
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4,Emmanuel
10/20/2016 03:07:38 pm
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1q6PsUNZqjsV0Rlu1KBaiysSebvFdPaaDAwJR5XuNYLY/edit?usp=sharing
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Mrs. McDowell
10/20/2016 04:55:48 pm
I think you have a strong opening statement. I would like to see you spend some time formatting (add a title, break up the lines).
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4 serina zezueta
10/20/2016 03:09:39 pm
https://docs.google.com/document/d/10Pzf_-Eucmrp5Ut_IMjmtyja1bFhubTz07XXyDu38FE/edit?usp=sharing
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Mrs. McDowell
10/20/2016 04:57:38 pm
Thank you for sharing your opinion. It felt very honest. Have you had a chance to make a word cloud to go with it?
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David S.
10/21/2016 08:38:35 am
https://drive.google.com/open?id=1-1AEoOvTpcc7GLWihUK93AuRe-sgb-9nCfhlrv2jqfk
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Mrs. McDowell
10/21/2016 10:54:28 am
Very thoughtful work! I like how the title, the word cloud and your formatting all contribute to the meaning of your poem.
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Mrs. McDowell
10/21/2016 11:23:18 am
Your poem and word cloud complement each other very well!
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Diego Diaz
10/21/2016 08:40:49 am
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1cX3mrkPY8ck4C1KfoK-3DXcWZRMKVXZv6uF0kM30_4E/edit?usp=sharing
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Mrs. McDowell
10/21/2016 11:02:06 am
We have already discussed the interesting layers of meaning in your poem, but I don't see a word cloud included here. Have you made one?
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Fernando Medina
10/21/2016 08:41:18 am
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1cRbunlKFKNbnPmzDqRcpGozy2h2rnGtlRGLSKejK-N0/edit?usp=sharing
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Mrs. McDowell
10/21/2016 11:05:35 am
I like that you end with that question, causing the reader to reflect on their own perceptions. Can you copy and paste your word cloud into the same document as the poem?
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1 Joseph Julian
10/21/2016 08:43:14 am
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1e0sz48VOoguLenXmf8-zkDRlT5dTdbvKqCCwQo11th4/edit?usp=sharing
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Mrs. McDowell
10/21/2016 11:09:48 am
I think the strategically placed couplets are really interesting. Did you make a word cloud yet?
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Edgard Castillo 1st period
10/21/2016 08:44:51 am
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1e62Os8KU1VPJxsqeVTtm6WJoS1ts3bsjeyh9OYERrRc/edit?usp=sharing
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Mrs. McDowell
10/21/2016 11:13:40 am
This poem has great rhythm and content. What made you choose that shape for the word cloud?
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1, Syaffia Sahl
10/21/2016 08:44:56 am
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1jfLAXGFt_00VyHt0j8RaE4boDa5sCKW8Q31rMOPorJo/edit?usp=sharing
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Mrs. McDowell
10/21/2016 11:15:30 am
The image and final line really resonate well together. What made you decide on that symbol?
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Katarina Nunez
10/21/2016 08:46:23 am
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1-kMFwhD_vFCKGvpl8MKIcVRpI32FzxQxc5ln-kkE0n0/edit?usp=sharing
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Mrs. McDowell
10/21/2016 11:17:30 am
Your focus on the future is interesting to consider and I like how you use deliberate pronouns (I, we) to make this about everyone.
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1 Joseph Julian
10/21/2016 08:48:21 am
https://tagul.com/4wh1g2u14ujq/america
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Mrs. McDowell
10/21/2016 11:10:58 am
Can you insert this word cloud into your poem file?
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Yeseri Rosa
10/21/2016 08:48:57 am
https://docs.google.com/document/d/13vffhQzf1bk2AyLUXbTnAZB8cVq7SmBD7BsdqeWW_n4/edit?usp=sharing
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Mrs. McDowell
10/21/2016 11:19:21 am
Beautiful final stanza. It would be interesting if you placed more colors in your word cloud to represent that.
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Angelina Milligan
10/21/2016 08:51:28 am
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1IuxFEO7QrNGiqVXzLNIZ7NZ8z4YAKWfCzbOT1lUj5Pk/edit?usp=sharing
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Mrs. McDowell
10/21/2016 11:21:29 am
I like that you included a deliberate shift in your poem. Have you made a word cloud yet to complement it?
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10/21/2016 08:51:31 am
https://docs.google.com/document/d/141435FZwfqc-RO98paRGcN_H3KTRrGLbJYXPlasHc_c/edit?usp=sharing
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Mrs. McDowell
10/21/2016 04:34:28 pm
Thank you for sharing your poem/rap.
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Guadalupe Rodriguez
10/21/2016 08:52:45 am
https://docs.google.com/document/d/11EOBBYCIHPAHjbW9ujsMAcGtq-YFib4EEJnbiXdhBv0/edit?usp=sharing
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Mrs. McDowell
10/21/2016 04:32:11 pm
Your word cloud was clear to read and illustrated your poem well.
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Noelle Jolie
10/21/2016 08:55:43 am
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1_Ir_OwaEvoPPEdyVzO9T8tULi87bpHUjaIqAEHfRy24/edit?usp=sharing
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Mrs. McDowell
10/21/2016 04:28:44 pm
Interesting use of color in each stanza.
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Diego Diaz
10/21/2016 08:59:45 am
https://tagul.com/jl3qnwgtajex/word-cloud
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Mrs. McDowell
10/21/2016 11:07:44 am
Will you put this in the same document as your poem? And why the hat? I feel like you could have picked a more relevant shape.
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Noelle Jolie
10/21/2016 09:01:47 am
https://tagul.com/a2vpztzvn418/murica
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Mrs. McDowell
10/21/2016 04:29:24 pm
What made you decide to use the Uncle Sam hat?
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Jasmine Guevara Reiff
10/21/2016 09:16:55 am
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1mQb0mbSYFJX2cws7svFGS9TMLTpAKv_xRsNoscrG7YI/edit?usp=sharing
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Mrs. McDowell
10/21/2016 04:25:46 pm
Your poem has a nice rhythm to it!
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Sophia Torres
10/21/2016 09:26:20 am
https://docs.google.com/document/d/19ua694mNEF3b7CFuIf1CMdnt_O2q7YB2NfPE8r8V0UY/edit?usp=sharing
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Mrs. McDowell
10/21/2016 04:23:44 pm
Thank you for sharing!
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Alexis Zamora
10/21/2016 12:32:26 pm
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1j0oWOuP1yavg3NZEeXZfc6M1kEt-zgcGJxv6tDX4PHs/edit?usp=sharing
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Mrs. McDowell
10/21/2016 04:37:25 pm
This poem is so reflective and calming. Did you make a word cloud for it yet?
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Andrea Suarez
10/21/2016 12:33:19 pm
https://docs.google.com/document/d/17bylPbGNTId7IaBsWh2_dK7OfbbkKutkqOrF73MJM30/edit?usp=sharing
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Mrs. McDowell
10/21/2016 04:40:03 pm
Interesting use of formatting and structure. Have you made a word cloud to go with it yet?
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Linda Hernandez
10/21/2016 02:43:05 pm
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1sFCDa62T0P56i-k6Tifn4xt8mj4OQjcMC7yK8XzjxGg/edit?usp=sharing
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Mrs. McDowell
10/21/2016 04:41:43 pm
Thank you for sharing your take on expectation vs. reality in America!
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iliana rodriguez
10/21/2016 03:00:11 pm
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1UZeoCHE0rGcgWfr-cO4WjddXCmkY_UfP8GYgGzbN7S0/edit?usp=sharing
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Mrs. McDowell
10/21/2016 04:44:00 pm
Interesting use of formatting and fonts to help express your message.
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Lupita granados
10/21/2016 03:03:17 pm
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1nF94jLK_0ep1UlCyxns-sRR2DjyFa2zuLwCr1TfrKO8/edit?usp=sharing
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Mrs. McDowell
10/21/2016 04:45:38 pm
You express your feelings directly in this poem. Have you made a word cloud to go with it yet?
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3, Zania Munoz
10/23/2016 04:49:43 pm
http://tagul.com/go?word=$word
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Angel Velasco
10/25/2016 04:10:51 pm
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1IHzj3uH6L46laziofQceCeTTGfZzA8k9Rgjjakcfhig/edit?usp=sharing
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Vinny Mertes
10/25/2016 04:15:17 pm
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1pmMm7rN6ZEfKzRH8sk2abPLbhFnOBmb8xYSSTSJ5g74/edit?usp=sharing
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